Your article looks good Tasnim, you have shown that you have understood many of the conventions of magazines here, such as the title, columns, images and accompanying quotes and page numbers. One image is slightly stretched and be consistent with font size throughout the article, but overall a good first piece. Your journalistic style is fairly informal and this is well written for a first piece, unclear of intended audience from article (maybe you comment on this in evaluation). Well done, Amy
Your article looks good Tasnim, you have shown that you have understood many of the conventions of magazines here, such as the title, columns, images and accompanying quotes and page numbers. One image is slightly stretched and be consistent with font size throughout the article, but overall a good first piece. Your journalistic style is fairly informal and this is well written for a first piece, unclear of intended audience from article (maybe you comment on this in evaluation). Well done,
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